This is the poem that I just recently wrote and turned in.
It is called homerun and I think the title fits the poem.
HOMERUN
The sounds of the game were intense.
Nobody could believe what was happening.
All you could hear were the hot-dog and beer venders
trying so desperately to sell their over priced products
and then loud moans and groans of the fans after every pitch.
It seemed that the life had been sucked out of the stadium.
Then a young Texas Rangers shortstop
stepped to the plate,
with one swing of the bat
he could change the course of the game.
Here comes the pitch, right down the middle.
The pitcher's only mistake of the game.
He swings.
You hear the crack of the bat echo across Arlington Stadium
then an uproar of screaming, clapping, yelling
all there in just a matter of seconds.
I had no idea what had just happened
it was unbelievable.
The passion, the glory of a homerun was swept upon me in an instant.
I started to wonder how someone
could hate this game,
then absolutly love and adore it the next second.
This really troubled me as a young child,
but as I have gotten older I realize
what these fans were feeling on that day in Arlington Stadium.
And that was love, anger, happiiness all mixed into one.
It didn't make any sense then
but now I realize what a homerun can do to you
and it's an unbelievable feeling.
10 comments:
great poem! (:
nice poem :)
good poem
Good Job, Baseball Rox!
thanks
That is an awesome poem. Pretty cool about baseball. I like baseball. Where were you at for the game?
I"m going to agree with everyone else, very nice poem! I liked it
I"m going to agree with everyone else, very nice poem! I liked it
It's better than strawberry milk shakes
Its a really great poem
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