Monday, May 7, 2007

Finally Released!!!

I finally decided to release my poem!! YAY. hehe. I hope ya'll enjoy it. =-]
HEAVEN.
Looking at the beach has always made me feel like I'm on

top of the world.

Letting the fine, white, little sand particles go

b-e-t-w-e-e-n your toes.

Making sand castles, then when you finally have your

masterpiece, it's swept away by the monstrous waves.

Then all that hard work was done for nothing.

But you DON'T stress about it because it's a small thing that

can be fixed.

So why in life do we always stress about all the small little

details, if they can be fixed?

Or, when we walk along the beach, just taking it easy, and

being thankful for everything we have.

All the unique creatures, the enchanting nature, the

special people, everything God made.

But then when we get home from the beach, why does our

perspective change?

It's like when we get home, we're not thankful, we get into a

depression mode, and nothing is right.

Just like the beach, we do the same things when we go

to church.

We're thankful, we're happy, we don't stress because we know

God will take care of it,

and though not everything is right...

we know it will be.

If everyone felt like they were always on the beach,

and on top of the world.

Well, let's just say...

It would be HEAVEN.

7 comments:

Tony Buck said...

That is an awesome poem. Your picture matches perfectly and it sends out a great message. Why do people change in different situations?

Anonymous said...

good poem, i like all the font change and stuff

Anonymous said...

I loved your poem, it was written well and the font styles made it fun to read!

agurlwithfaith said...

Why thank you all for the comments.
They were very nice!
=-]

Lacy Jo said...

This is an amazing poem! I love your picture and I loved how you changed your font to make certain words stand out! You did a really good job on writting this poem! :)

Eliza101 said...

I really like your poem!! I think that it is really cool how you did all of the words different sizes and fonts. Good job!!

Erin said...

Your poem had such a great message of loving all of God's creations and I feel I could really relate to it.