The View!
The wind hit our faces hard
We kept our smiles
It was a long way up
Our legs all hurt
The view was beautiful from all angles
It was a tiny space
My family and I found a place to stand
My mom stood there and pointed out birds
Of course I really didn't care
I just nodded and smiled
It was in the middle of February in Florida
I wasn't cold at all
Only when the wind hit my face
I felt like a bird
I was able to see everything it felt like
The trees looked like bushy pillows
The sound of birds and natures sourrounded me
And with one last look I headed back down
7 comments:
This is such a good poem! Awesome job :).
That's such a cool poem! Where was this in Flordia? I really like the words you chose to tell the story and I like the pictures you picked. Good job!! :]
Thanks! (:
Yeah it was in Florida.
Your pictures are really good. They fit very well with the poem. You did a really good job!! ;)
Yeah I found those pictures online because i didn't want to use the one I had. It would of given away who I was. lol
i really like the poem
nice poem i liked it.
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